Forum:Arts and Creative Writing/Original Poetry

I finished this a while ago for Fén and I was hoping for feedback and opinions, as well as hearing whether other people have tried the same in their conlangs and possibly even samples:

http://conlang.wikia.com/wiki/F%C3%A9n_Verse

My goal was to create culturally unique poetry but I mostly ended up with a few drinking songs, still I suppose no culture starts with Homeric odes. I was a bit disappointed in myself falling back on rhyming metre, but I think it comes with the limitations of my language due to the relatively strict natural word order [though it there's more flexibility now].

Anyone else experiment with some of the wierder possibilities of metre a ground up conlang might grant them? Do you want to return to the index?