[r] is not an approximant, it's a trill. [ɹ ~ ɻ] is the alveolar approximant found in most dialects of English. Besides that, some of the allophony is strange and you may want to explain it more, as well as use IPA instead of writing (and anyways, I would use <hl> for /ɬ/ because Icelandic). The vowel inventory is also weird, since it randomly contrasts tenseness on only one vowel and it's a high vowel. Only having front vowels is also weird, but I think there's a natlang that only has front vowels (including rounded ones) and a schwa out there somewhere, if only I could remember the name of it, and the rest of the phoneme inventory is pretty tame (with the exception of the /θ ɹ ɬ/ sounds and the weird allophones and diphthongs) so you could probably get away with something like what you have if you modelled it off natlangs. Joersc (talk) 23:20, September 2, 2015 (UTC)
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